Thursday, July 21, 2011

What do you think of this scene (sorry for multiple post)?

ok, when you say whatever lesson he had had second lesson, say whatever class he had second period. It just matches the way it sounds today. I also think you should either take out or shorten the part where you talk about the teacher making diagrams and you copying notes. Other than that, it was interesting, i kinda want to know what happens next, it was good.

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